KATY PERRY REFERAT IN ENGLISCH
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Katy is an American singer and songwriter and famous all over the world. She is a great star voice and her motto is: We love to entertain you! Katy was born in 1984 in Santa Barbara and her real name is Katheryn Elizabeth Hudson. She is 29 years old.
Katys parents work in a church. In her past she sang gospel music in a church and was a fan of Freddie Mercury and his band Queen.
Perrys first album came out in 2001 under her real name Katy Hudson and it was a Christian Gospel album. Later she worked with the production firm "the Matrix". The Matrix worked with some of the biggest stars, as for example with Britney Spears..The first single I Kissed a Girl was published from her following album One of the boys in 2008 .And topped the charts in 20 countries worldwide. The third album of her "Teenage Dream" came out in 2010 with the songs "Teenage Dream" and California Girls" which was one of the summer hits in this year! In October, "Firework" was released as the third single from Teenage Dream. It became the album's third consecutive number one on the Hot 100. As a result, she became the first female in eleven years to have three consecutive number-ones from a single album. In November 2010, she released her first fragrance, Purr. In February 2011, a remixed version of "E.T." featuring rapper Kanye West was released as the fourth single from Teenage Dream. It topped the Hot 100 chart for five non-consecutive weeks. It was titled the California Dreams Tour and including 124 shows in Europe, Australia, Asia, North America and South America. In June, the album's fifth single, "Last Friday Night (T.G.I.F.)", topped the Hot 100. This allowed her to achieve a record for being the first female to achieve five number one Hot 100 songs from one album, and tying Michael Jackson's record.
Teenage Dream became the third album in history to produce six top five hit singles. Meow was released as her second fragrance in 2011. In early July 2012, her autobiographical documentary movie Katy Perry: Part of Me was released .Killer Queen was released as her third fragrance in August 2013. "Roar" made its debut as the lead single from Prism on August 10, 2013. Perry recorded and co-wrote a duet with her boyfriend John Mayer titled "Who You Love" for his album Paradise Valley. The album was released on August 20, 2013.[ "Unconditionally" was released as the album's second single on October 16, 2013. "Dark Horse" was released as the album's third single .Perry will begin her third headlining tour, The Prismatic World Tour, on May 7, 2014.
Russell Brand and Katy Perry married on October 23, 2010. Their marriage was dissolved in July 2012.She has been in an on-off relationship with John Mayer since August 2012.
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ich würde den satz mit "is agreat star voice " (was willst du damit sagen? ;) ) und dem motto mit weove to entertain you einfach weglassen. ich find das als einleitung echt merkwürdig. ansonsten vllt noch bessere übergänge, wiederholungen vermeiden und vielleicht die sätze nicht so abhacken sondern manchmal als nrbensatz einbringen. sonst klingts vllt etwas zu abgehackt ;)
Ich würde mal sagen:
**Wikipedia Englisch lässt grüßen. ** Weißt Du überhaupt, was " fragrance" bedeutet? Wissen deine Zuhörer das? Woher sollen sie "non-consecutive" und "headlining tour" kennen? Kannst Du das überhaupt aussprechen?
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