Wir müssen in Englisch eine pro & contra Argumentation Schreiben ' ob es gut oder schlecht ist Jung zu sein. Wie ist mir diese Einleitung gelungen?

When we are young we explore many things that help us in growth because of new experiences In our youth we find ourself and build a character. But being young can be very annoying, so many people of our age think they want to grow up faster while others want to stay young forever. This topic raises the question of whether being a teenager serves an advantage or disadvantage in different aspects of life.

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