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In the past I was alive
And when you were gone
The pain was even worse than a stab with a knife
The time without you was hard at first but now it's a gift
and I ask myself, did this love really exist?
Yea' and now i'm standing here, alone in the rain
and I wait for the moment when the time will heal all my pain
But its a hard way which is long
And the question is, will I stay until then strong?
I lost a lot of people who were everything to me
yes, exactly these people wore my heart's key
But they were gone, gone so far away
And time passes day by day
But i'm still here'
And ask myself when this pain get finally disappear