Hey Leute wir sollen eine Charakterisierung machen und ich mach das zum ersten mal und wollte euch fragen ob man das irgendwie besser machen kann, ob ich das was weg lassen soll, ob das okay ist oder ob das villeicht nicht etwas gewisses fehlt.
Colm McCabe is probably 14 years old and lost his family.He is an orphan from UK and lives in a children home because he is underage.He looks like a strong boy. He wear dusty old clothes because he works in the outback. He runs a way from the children home and travel to his friend bill to Australia he loves to he aktive by helping bill by the work. Colm is helpful, brave and optimistic boy. He is a person who likes to help people and he is a animal loving person. I think colm is a good person because he is friendliy lovely he cares for bill and for his Dog rusty.