Wie findet ihr das Gedicht?

Also ich bin fast 14 Jahre alt und habe das Gedicht geschrieben und wie oben schon steht wollte ich fragen wie ihr das Gedicht findet:)

In the quiet of the night,

Stars twinkle oh so bright.

Whispers of the wind so light,

Nature's beauty, a pure delight.

Dreams dance in the moonlit sky,

As the world in slumber lies.

In the silence, hear the sigh

Of the night, before it flies.

Embrace the darkness, don't fear,

For in shadows, light appears.

Let go of worry, let go of doubt,

In the night, find peace throughout.

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ArwenPotter

24.03.2024, 00:46

Ich finde es sehr, sehr schön☺🥰. Hat schöne Reime drin und ich finde, du hast Talent dafür auf Englisch zu schreiben.

Frauklousen

Beitragsersteller

24.03.2024, 00:50

Danke schön ☺️wenn ich auf deutsch schreibe finde ich einerseits nie die richtigen Worte und andererseits klingt es in meinen Ohren nie so gut auf deutsch zu Reimen :)

hologence

24.03.2024, 10:25

Erinnert stark an das Schlaflied von Marvin-The-Paranoid-Android:

Now the world has gone to bed

Darkness won't engulf my head

I can see by infra-red

How I hate the night

Now I lay me down to sleep

Try to count electric sheep

Sweet dream wishes you can keep

How I hate the night

Frauklousen

Beitragsersteller

24.03.2024, 10:32

Stimmt :D danke für die liebe Antwort

Somebody999560

24.03.2024, 10:28

Ich finde es sehr schön und voll gefühlsvoll...

Du hast auf jeden Fall Talent =)

Woher ich das weiß:eigene Erfahrung

Frauklousen

Beitragsersteller

24.03.2024, 10:33

Vielen dank das freut mich das es dir gefällt :)

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