Hey,
Ich habe einen Songtext geschrieben und ich wollte einfach mal fragen was ihr davon haltet.
(Gerapt)
I wake up (hold up) I get to the mirror my eyes black (huh), it’s crazy I look like a killer
But I talked to god he said I’d look normal, don’t know what to say, but it won’t be formal
When you look in my eye, ayo don’t deny
Am I the only person to see this shit, I look like a madman, though I’m not gonna quit
(Gesungen)
I have bad blood going through my veins
I follow a bad god, it makes me insane
I love all the things that makes me hurt
Don't know how to say I miss the word
Lost my hope and try to die
Believe me I not a good guy
(Gerapt)
Right (yeah) I can be aggressive so you think I’m expressive
Maybe I just do not know I’m not good with words, not a pro
But don’t call me a fool it’s just a simple rule, don’t make this mistake
Or I’ll smack your head till the jaw will break
How’s that? (damn) It’s kinda perplex I look in the crowd who is the next
Man, I got a name just use it, offences are things I cannot admit
Not with a deeper sense, but just stay there, don’t cross this fence
You say I act like a fool (fool) or my style (what) is not that cool
Yeah some say I’m a lazy rat but I’m being myself I don’t care about that
Just turn around and talk to the paw was that too mean? Have I gone too far?
(Gesungen)
I have bad blood going through my veins
I follow a bad god, it makes me insane
I love all the things that makes me hurt
Don't know how to say I miss the word
Lost my hope and try to die
Believe me I not a good guy
(Gerapt)
Just go the fuck out of my head I can’t stand this can I go to bed
Can I escape this world? Can I change this world?
There’s this voice (hey) calling for me, please tell me (no) am I finally free?
Just look at me as a person, not as a judge! Hostile faces watching me, it gets too much
There’s this cage (god) surrounding me the doors locked can I get the key?
Someone said (hmm) life is so beautiful because it has a meaning
Maybe you can only find it if you face your feelings
Since I was six these emotions are hunting me down
It’s like pointing a gun at my head and pushing me into the ground
You say life’s a journey sometime it will turn
Okay cool but “how long to travel?” is still to learn
Außerdem bin ich etwas stuck..Ich möcht den Text auf ein Beat rappen/singen und ich weiß nicht wie und was ich betonen soll und was für einen Beat ich nehmen soll.
Danke! LG
Nein Pop Song :)