Englisch text über handys im unterricht

Stimmt das so? das was ich fett gemacht hab bei dem bin ich mir nicht sicher. Wäre super, wenn ihr mit Tipps geben könntet oder verbessert. Danke :))

On the most schools are cell phones not allowed. But many pupils ignore this. But the teachers hate the one and take away the cell phone. Here are a lot of pro and contra arguments. When the pupil needs help they can phones their parents. On the other hand the cell phones can ring in the period and these distract the other pupils to. I know the periods are often boring and messaging with friends is funny but you should be attentive to receive a good mark in a test. I think the teachers are right but I can´t live without my cell phone on/at school.

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09.01.2013, 23:10

OMG - so viele Fehler.... Hier nur EINIGE Korrekturen:

****In most schools cell phones are not allowed. ** (Der Satz "but the teachers..." ergibt keinen Sinn.)

Here are some pros and cons ...** If pupils need help, they can phone their parents...

Komma nach "On the other hand"

... hand, cell phones can ring... pupils, too. messaging / texting with friends is** fun** ...

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