Englisch Hausi Bewerbung
Hallo. Ich muss in englisch eine bewerbung für ein platz als au-pair mädchen schreiben. währe nett wenn ihr rechtschreibfehler, grammattikfehler, verbesserungsforschläge geben könntet.
Personal statement
I love to explore new places, meeting new people and to learn something about other cultures. I never stayed at Australia before, so I wanted to visit it. I think it`s a good way to become a more independent person and to improve my English. It’s also a good chance to learn something about the live in this country, because later you can visit it as an tourist, but you can´t live like an Australian. In my childhood, we heaved some Au- Pairs and so I wanted to test it also.
Qualifications/Skills
Language skills German native speaker, learn English since 2004, some French
Work experience
2009 to 2010 Volunteer work: helping by the child gymnastics
2011 to date Volunteer work: helping by the church for children
2009 to date Regular job: helping children to learn, to make their homework (1-4 hours per week)
2011 to 2012 Regular job: delivering magazines by bike (2 hours per week)
Hobbies and interests
I love doing sport like gymnastics, jogging,… I also like to reed, hear to music and play the guitar. I find it very nice to help other children for example doing with them their homework,…
References
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1 Antwort
Hallo,
I love to explore new places, meeting new people and to learn something about other cultures. I have never stayed in Australia before, so I would like to visit it. I think it is a good way to become a more independent person and to improve my English. It’s also a good chance to learn something about life in this country kein Komma because you can visit Australia as a tourist later, but you cannot live like an Australian. (Zusammenhang, Sinn??)
In my childhood, we had some Au Pairs and so I also would like try it .
Qualifications/Skills
Language skills German native speaker, have studied English since 2004, some French
Work experience
2009 to 2010 Voluntary work: assistant in child gymnastics
2011 to date Voluntary work: assistant at church for children
2009 to date Regular job: helping children to learn, to do their homework (1-4 hours per week)
2011 to 2012 Regular job: delivering magazines by bike (2 hours per week)
Hobbies and interests
I love doing sports like gymnastics, jogging,… I also like to read, listen to music and play the guitar. I find it very nice to help other children**, for example, doing their homework with them**,…
In der Schriftsprache keine Kurzformen verwenden.
Ich hoffe, ich habe nichts übersehen.
:-) AstridDerPu