Kann mir jemand helfen bei dieser Englisch argumentation?
Da ich in englisch nicht die beste bin könnt ihr mir ja vielleicht helfen :) Wir sollten eine argumentation zum Thema soziale Netzwerke gut oder schlecht? Das alles in englische. Wär nett wenn ihr euch meine Argumentation mal anschaut und mir Fehler sagt die ich dann berichtigen kann. A statistic of the website www.lessenstiel.lu shows us that we use a wide variety of social networks. For example 71% use Facebook, 52% Instagram and 41% Snapchat, that are only a few social networks of the many we use. We would like to know if social networks are good or bad for us. In the following comment I will discuss whether social networks are good or bad for us.
First of all I think with social networks is communication easier. It is because you can communicate with people all over the world, if they have the social network too. Look at a example a member of your family life in another country than you can communicate with them over social networks like facebook or snapchat.
Not only that, I also think that important informations are fast distribute. You can write a text on a social network and all your friends can read them. Let me give you an example, if you are pregnant you can write a text on a social network and all your friends know this import Information.
In contrast to this is a point against social networks that the personal contact will be less. Many people communicate only about social networks.
Another significant point is that the persons in the social network are not always real. In a social network you can choose our age, your name and other personal Informations but no one knows if the Informations are right. If the profile looks good you think they are friendly, Unfortunately we can not be sure that the person isn´t lying, maybe the person you trust is a criminal.
Weighing the pros and cons, I come to the conclusion that social networks have pros and cons. It is important to mention that dangers are everywhere and that is why in future many people will use the social networks too. Everyone must decide for themselves which social network they use and how often. Danke im vorraus :)
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good or bad for us. In the following comment I will discuss whether social networks are good or bad for us.
Das good or bad for us, hast du oben schon. Somit sollte dem Leser das ganze schon klar sein.
It is because you can communicate with people all over the world, if they have the social network too.
It Is because klingt komisch. It's possible to get easily connection to people all over the world.
Look at a example? Der Text klingt nach einer Aufzählung und nicht nach einem Bericht. Ich hätte: Here is a short example benutzt.
..your friends know this import Information.
important? import - export ist etwas anderen.
our age, your name and other personal Information
Our? Am besten bei der Form your bleiben oder wenn du unser be nutzen möchtest our benutzen.
Weighing the pros and cons, I come to the conclusion that social networks have pros and cons.
Nachdem ich pro und contra verglichen habe, kommst du zu dem Ergebniss das es pro und contra gibt? Das hast du doch oben schon ausführlich erläutert? Du sollst doch nun dein Endergebniss der Vor- und Nachteile schildern.
Nachdem ich pro- und contra verglichen habe, komme ich zu dem folgenden Ergebniss:
Weighing the pros and cons, I come to the Foliengrössen conclusion about social networks:
It is important to mention....
So würde ich das grob formulieren.
danke das hilft mir schon weiter :)