Hey...ich habe für den Englischunterricht eine Zusammenfassung geschrieben und bin mir nicht ganz sicher, ob das, was ich geschrieben habe alles so stimmt...Könnte vl. jemand der was davon versteht mal drüberlesen? thx

The story is about the girl Nina and it’s her birthday. Her brother David and some friends planed a trip to the Kakadu National Park as a birthday surprise. The group had an argument about what to do. Nina and Mike want to go swimming in a freshwater billabong, but David disagreed. He worried about salt water crocodiles which could be there. They arrived at the park and the rest of the day went by normal. At the next day the group did some rock climbing, but while they did this, Mike and Nina disappeared. David and Cathy were worried and David hurt his foot. After much waiting time they come back to the other both. When Nina was alone with David, she told him that she and Mike were at a lower pool, but than a crocodile appeared at the other side. They ran and climbed a rock, so nothing fatal happened. But it was a big shock.