Hallo, ich schreibe morgen meine erste Englischklasur und wollte fragen, ob mir jemand sagen könnte, ob das eine gute Characterisation wäre oder was ich noch verbessern müsste.
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und hier meine Characterisation
Charcterisation
The main character of the text „Early Autumn“ by Langston Hughes ( 1902-1967) is called Bill Walker (l. 6). He is a lawyer in New York (l. 14) and has got a wife named Lucille (l. 28). Besides he has got two kids (l. 16). In line 9 it seems as Bill is loved by Mary, a woman, who he was in love with when he was younger. But he already had forgotten Mary (l. 7). Bill was very sad because of her and for this reason he is a bit reserved (l. 36). When Mary greets Bill it seems as Mary wants a kiss from Bill but he only helds his hand out.
In line 12 you can see, that Bill Walker is a very polite man. But he is dishonest as well, because he does not say the truth certainly in deference to Mary. Actually Bill wanted to say, that Mary looks old insteadt of that he said she looks well, only because he does not want to hurt her.
Bill is very satisfied with his liefe, he is proud out of his kids (l 32) and in contrast to Mary Bill looks very young (l. 25).
Danke im vorraus (: