In the following I´m going to describe the job as an electrician. For the job as an electrician you need good math skills as well as logical reasoning. Among the tasks belong for example the set of cables, to change switches, to install sockets, to mount lamps, to maintains equipment and find the fault. The aids you have to have for the job are a multimeter, it´s an instrument which measures electrical current as well as a duspol, a folding rule, a screwdriver, protective clothing and a pencil. Dangers are that you can get a electric shock and you can become blind when a spark jump in your eye.

habt ihr noch Verbesserungen für mich bzw was kann ich noch hinzufügen?

In the following I´m going to characterize Laura and the relationship between her and her Friend Ravi. Laura is the main character in the book “The Carbon Diaries 2015”. She is a normal teenager who goes to school. She also has a sister named Kim who Laura really loves, but also she´s jealous of Kim, because their parents tread them different. When Carbon dioxide was limited, she was very unhappy with the situation, about the society, her family and her love Life with Ravi. All has change. Laura reacts over and dramatized all, because she doesn´t know how to react and what she has to feel in difficult situations. That shows that Laura is an unsure girl. She is also easy to manipulate, that demonstrate that she doesn’t really know herself and that she´s really insecure (p.80). Another character property is that she´s self-pity, sometimes depressive and very sentimental. Her private life is very important to her. She cares a lot of her band, her beginning love Ravi and the friendship to Adi and co. Laura is also very brave, but concurrently scared too. Sometimes she felt very alone, because no know cares about her. Her parents argue all time, Ravi doesn´t shows interests no more, because of his scholarship and Kim is cold-hearted and careless (p.335). When Laura kicked out of school, she realizes that she needs education (p.125). She do not get along with the difficult Situation. Everything has changed. Her family, her school notes, her friends and her love life.

Her relationship to Ravi is complicated. First they were in love with each other. Since Ravi has problems in his family, because of the difficult relationship between his parents, he only wants to get out of the city and only not because of his parents, but also because he wants to get away from the situation and the Carbon reduce. He wants to get a better life and that without his family. So Ravi wants to get a scholarship for a university in Germany. Then he wanted to study green engineering to improve the situation of his country (p.264). His education is him more important than Laura, but Laura still loves him. Ravi thinks that Laura isn´t that much important than his future. Laura cannot understand his decision. She thinks when he would really love her, he wouldn´t go to Germany and let her alone, and so they break up the contact and Laura get´s in love with Adi her previous best friend, who plays in her band. The relationship of Laura and Ravi was romantic and careful at the beginning, but then Ravi hasn´t much time for Laura and they break up.

Habt ihr noch Verbesserungen zur Rechtschreibung, Form und etc. Hab ich was bei meiner Analyse vergessen?

Danke schonmal im vorraus :)

Das Gedicht besteht aus 4 Strophen mit jeweils 4 Versen. Es hat kein Reimschema. Das Gedicht besteht aus einem dreihebigen Jambus. Insgesamt gibt der Text einen Überblick über die Natur und deren Missbrauch der Menschen. Der Autor vergleicht positive Sachen mit negativen Sachen "clean air" und "pousnous gas",Strophe 1. Vers 1.Hiermit will der Autor die Natur und den Menschen gegenüberstellen und zeigen was die Natur alles gutes für uns tut und wie wir Menschen sie zerstören wollen,obwohl diese unser einziger Lebensort ist. Es wird immer davon geredet, dass Menschen sich ändern sollen, aber in Wirklichkeit ändert sich niemand, aber jeder weiß dass etwas dagegen getan werden sollte, gegen die Umweltverschmutzung, die Wasserverschwendung der Menschen und die Müllentsorgung der Menschen. Die Menschen wissen das etwas getan werden muss, um die Erde aufrecht zu erhalten, aber sie geben eine Entschuldigung nach der anderen Strophe 4 Vers 4. Der Autor will dem Leser eine gewisse Einschüchterung vermitteln, indem er den Leser persönlich anspricht "You". Mit dem "I" will McGough die Erde, beziehungsweise Gott Identifizieren, sozusagen als ob Gott bzw die Natur mit dem Leser spricht und ihm ein schlechtes Gewissen machen will, um ihn die Situation näher zu bringen. Der Autor hat diese Art der Kommunikation gewählt,um den Lesern persönlich anzusprechen und um auf ihre Fehler hinzuweisen. Der Leser fragt sich so, was er falsch gemacht haben könnte und wie man diese Fehler beheben könnte. Es bleibt offen, ob der Leser sich ändern will nachdem er dieses Gedicht gelesen hat oder ob er sich überhaupt nicht angesprochen fühlt. Das Gedicht will den Lesern vermitteln, dass sie sich ändern sollen und aufhören sollen ihren einzigen Lebensort kaputt zu machen. Man soll Taten zeigen und keine Ausreden

Übersetzung:

The poem exists of 4 stanzas with 4 verses in each case. It has no rhyme pattern. The poem exists from dreihebigen Jambus. All together the text gives an overview about the nature and their abuse of the people. The author compares positive things to negative things "clean air" and "pousnous gas", stanza 1st verse 1. Herewith the author wants to confront the nature and the person and what show the nature everything good for us acts and how we want to destroy people them, although this is our only life place. One always talks of the fact that people should change, but in reality nobody changes, but everybody knows that a little bit against it the water waste of the people and the waste disposal of the people should be done, against the environmental pollution. The people know a little bit must be done to maintain the earth, but they give an excuse after the other stanza to 4 verses 4. The author wants to provide a certain intimidation for the reader, while he the reader appeals personally to "You". With "I" McGough wants the earth, or

Warum zerfällt die DNA durch Wärme nicht in ihre Einzelteile?