Bitte Leute hilft mir das ich es perfekt habe weil ich leider Schwierigkeiten habe in Englisch,wär sehr lieb.
Also ich hab das jetzt so gemacht:
Last year Paul hod his birthday on the 20th of February. His parents gave him an elektro shark for his birthday. He was very happy about that, Paul was once in the sea with his electric shark played with it. Two women were on the boat and saw the electric shark in the sea. The two women were terrified because they thaught it was a real shark. AIl the people have heard and the lifequard too. And they were all scared of it. The lifequard got the electric shark out of the sea and scolded PauI, Paul apologized to all the quests and de did not bring the elcectric shark to the sea because it looks so real.From then on it was forbidden to play the electric ageathe animals in the sea.
Man sollte ungefähr 10 bis 12 Sätze machen und ungefähr 100 Wörter haben und mann sollte es in Simple Past machen
Kann es so stimmen?
