Englischer Text über Irland , ist er gut? Seht ihr noch Fehler? :
Ireland,is an island surround of the Atlantic Ocean. Its capital is Dublin.Ireland is divided into two parts , the bigger one, the Republic of Ireland and the other one Norhern Ireland which belongs to the United Kingdom. Ireland also will be called "the Esmerald Isle" by tourists because there are so many green spaces. People love the idyllically hilly countryside which offers national parcs, lots of animals like sheep and beautiful beaches and lakes. Tourists can also discover the unique countryside by bike or on foot, but it's useful to take along an umbrella because it is often raining. People call Ireland either "Celtic Tiger" because its economy is booming. I believe, most inhabitants speak English than main language , I think ,irish will be only spoken by a minority. On top of that I think there are more catholics than protestants there. Above all Ireland is famous for its music and dances, typical instruments are the fiddle, the flute and the harp. A symbol, typical of the Island is the clover. In the end I still wanna add tourists can reach the Island by plane and by ship. Bitte niht löschen und Dane für Tips !!!
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also, das erste komma ist falsch. am besten wäre surrounded by. parc wird mit k geschrieben, also park. ja, und dann das wanna (want to). Der Text ist sonst echt gut.!!!!!!! Sonst alles richtig!!!!!!! vielleicht hast du ja deine infos von wikipedia. wenn nicht, lass dir doch mal die seite übersetzen. das hilft mir auchbei englischen texten!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Viel Erfolg!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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There are many wild animals and national parks in South Africa and safari tourism is a great source of income.
South Africa doesn’t have a uniform culture because of its ethnic diversity and history. Customs and traditions often depend on the region and the population.
Stereotypes of South Africa are that wild animals move freely around the country, the locals speak African and it isn’t safe to travel there.
Between 1948 and 1994 South Africa was ruled by apartheid, a form of racism.
Ireland, is surrounded by ... It's capital ... Ireland is divided into two parts. The Republic of Ireland, the bigger one, and Northern Ireland which belongs to the United Kingdom.
Ireland is also called ... People love the idyllic ... ... because it often rains.
People call Ireland "Celtic Tiger" ... I think that English is the main language and that Irish is spoken only by a minority. I'm also quite certain that the major part of the population belongs to the catholic church and that less people are members of the protestant church. ... dances. Typical ... The island's symbol is the clover.
Ireland can be reached by plane or by ship.
Dublin is definitely not the capital of Northern Ireland! Zu behaupten, dass Dublin die Hauptstadt der Insel Irland sei, ist daher ein ganz schlimmer sachlicher Fehler!
South Africa is an emerging nation on the southern tip of the African continent. The capital city is Pretoria. 57, 9 million people live in South Africa. The majority of South Africans are Christian. It has 11 official languages but the most spoken is English. The local currency is Rand.
There are many wild animals and national parks in South Africa and safari tourism is a great source of income.
South Africa doesn’t have a uniform culture because of its ethnic diversity and history. Customs and traditions often depend on the region and the population.
Stereotypes of South Africa are that wild animals move freely around the country, the locals speak African and it isn’t safe to travel there.
Between 1948 and 1994 South Africa was ruled by apartheid, a form of racism.
Jup gleich in der ersten Zeile, der Atlantic ist sicher nicht von Irland umgeben :)
South Africa is an emerging nation on the southern tip of the African continent. The capital city is Pretoria. 57, 9 million people live in South Africa. The majority of South Africans are Christian. It has 11 official languages but the most spoken is English. The local currency is Rand.
There are many wild animals and national parks in South Africa and safari tourism is a great source of income.
South Africa doesn’t have a uniform culture because of its ethnic diversity and history. Customs and traditions often depend on the region and the population.
Stereotypes of South Africa are that wild animals move freely around the country, the locals speak African and it isn’t safe to travel there.
Between 1948 and 1994 South Africa was ruled by apartheid, a form of racism.
surround of the atlantic ocean?
esmerald isle?
english than main language?
und so weiter....
also.. ich würde das ganze nochmal von jemandem korrigieren lassen. wenn ich hier alle schreib- und grammatikfehler aufführe, könnte ich den text auch gleich selbst neu schreiben, was ja wohl nicht sinn und zweck dieser aufgabe ist, oder?
wenns für den englischunterreicht ist und da wert auf ausdruck, rechtschreibung und grammatik gelegt wird, wirds maximal ne 4 werden - mit viel (!) gutem willen.
South Africa is an emerging nation on the southern tip of the African continent. The capital city is Pretoria. 57, 9 million people live in South Africa. The majority of South Africans are Christian. It has 11 official languages but the most spoken is English. The local currency is Rand.
There are many wild animals and national parks in South Africa and safari tourism is a great source of income.
South Africa doesn’t have a uniform culture because of its ethnic diversity and history. Customs and traditions often depend on the region and the population.
Stereotypes of South Africa are that wild animals move freely around the country, the locals speak African and it isn’t safe to travel there.
Between 1948 and 1994 South Africa was ruled by apartheid, a form of racism.
South Africa is an emerging nation on the southern tip of the African continent. The capital city is Pretoria. 57, 9 million people live in South Africa. The majority of South Africans are Christian. It has 11 official languages but the most spoken is English. The local currency is Rand.
There are many wild animals and national parks in South Africa and safari tourism is a great source of income.
South Africa doesn’t have a uniform culture because of its ethnic diversity and history. Customs and traditions often depend on the region and the population.
Stereotypes of South Africa are that wild animals move freely around the country, the locals speak African and it isn’t safe to travel there.
Between 1948 and 1994 South Africa was ruled by apartheid, a form of racism.
green spaces? :D
sorry, der musst noch aufgeführt werden. den rest lass ich mal für andere. ergo: schreib den text nochmal neu - und dann bitte in englisch.. leider ist der text so absolut nicht brauchbar und teilweise auch sinnfrei.
viel erfolg trotzdem!