Englisch Text berichtigen simple Present?
Vorab ich weiß das der Text schlecht ist aber vielleicht könnt Ihr ihn ein bisschen retten hahhahah. Wir sollten das simple present nutzen. Auf Groß- Kleinschreibung bitte nicht achten hab das auf dem Handy nur ganz schnell getippt also nicht wundern.
My working day starts at 12:00, so I‘m waiting for the children to support them doing their homework. Always at 14:00 we having lunch. At 14:30, i selects two children for the dishwashing Service. During the flushing i helps the children to rinse, clean and wipe. At 15:00 i turns off the dishwasher. Always at 15:30 starts the open meeting. Offen i‘m responsible for hand over Games, balls, scooters and drinks but sometimes i plays with the children togheter football or other Games. At 17:30 we start clearing tables and chairs. At 17:45 the youth Club opens. Always i‘m behind the counter. My responsibilities include hand over Materials and Drinks. But of course my Most Important task is to supervision the young People. I usually check the whole House, if all windows are closed and all the lights off.
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SO würde ich das schreiben: My workday usually starts at 12 pm, where I help school kids with their homework. At 2pm we always have lunch, and half an hour later I select two children to do the dishwashing. In the meantime, we all help to tidy up the room by cleaning, rinsing and wiping. Also, I'm often responsible for giving away(?) boardgames, balls, scooters and drinks, but sometimes we play together.
At 5:30pm we start clearing the tables and chairs. At 5:45pm the "youth club" opens.
I always stay behind the counter. There, my responibilities include lending out materials and drink. But of course my most important task is to supervise the children.
And at the end of the day I check the whole house for opened windows and turned on lights.
Aber bitte beachte dass es schon spät ist und ich vllt auch kleine Fehler eingebaut habe, außerdem hat man im simple present kein -ing am verb hängen! ^^