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Palm oil is everywhere – rainforest on our plate and in our stomach

A life without palm oil is nearly impossible, because nowadays it can be found literally everywhere: in foods and cosmetics as well as in cleaning products. In order to grow oil palms, forests have to be burned to clear areas - even if it's illegal. These burnings forces people from their traditional lands and are connected with loss of biodiversity. The release of high levels of carbon dioxide effects the speed of global warming negatively.

Environmentalists are exerting pressure on companies, which still use palm oil in their products. In my opinion, the Greenpeace organization has the best solution to reduce the large amount of burned rainforests. According to their attitude, customers are very powerful and can put pressure on brands like “Kit Kat”, “Head & Shoulders” or “Colgate”. These are only a few examples of companies, which are still using this type of oil in their products. The solution isn’t a simple boycott. The population have to convince these concerns to drop the largest palm oil trader on earth, wilmar. Wilmar is still working with the worst forest destroyers on earth. If we – the customers – publicly expose brands buying from them through media, the hole industry will receive a message: Stop wrecking forests!

I really like the strategy of Greenpeace, because they don’t simply say: “Stop buying products, which includes palm oil”. They really solve the problems at the root and would like to stop the wrecking of forest totally, in a way, that the largest trader will be exposed. If all customers work together, we can make a change. Every voice counts!

Englisch, Palmöl, Korrekturlesen, Umweltverschmutzung, Pollution
Englisch Zeitungsartikel Pollution/Environment - bitte um Korrektur?

Ich muss bei meiner Arbeit einen Zeitungsbericht über Umwelt/Pollution schreiben und bitte um die Korrektur folgender Arbeit. Danke!

Earth is becoming "Planet Plastic"!Can we still save our planet?

Author, 23th of November 2019

 

We create more and more pollution. Air, water, land and soil pollution effect all of us. Can we still manage to save our planet?

We are creating more pollution than ever before. The biggest problems on humans’ health come from air, water, noise and land pollution. What does these types mean in detail? The major reason of air pollution is cutting down trees. Burning fossil fuels and driving every short distance with the car effects the environment as well. The health effect of air pollution are serious – one third of death from stroke, lung cancer and heard diseases are due to air pollution. The main problem is that the microscopic pollution can slip past our body’s defence. Water pollution is when waste, chemicals or other particles cause a body of water to become harmful to the fish and animals that needs the water to survive. The main problem caused by water pollution is that it kills organism that depend on these water bodies. Dead fish, crabs, dolphins and other animals often wind up on beaches, killed by pollutants in their living environment. Another big problem is air pollution. That is anything that damages or contaminates the land. The effect on human health include breathing disorders, birth defect, skin diseases and cancer. Another potential type of pollution is the so-called “noise pollution”. That refers to the reference of noise (from machines, transportations systems, trains, etc.) in the environment that is very harmful to the mental and physical health if living beings on earth. Hearing lose, raise blood pressure and pulse rates are only some of the main problems by this type of pollution. What can we do against this? First, reduce the number of trips taken in your car. Second, never throw something away, that someone else might be able to use. A third and last tip: Use re-useable shopping bags made of cotton and avoid plastic bags.

We all have to change our behaviour a bit. On the other hand, do we really want to destroy our planet?

Englisch, Schule, Umwelt, Korrekturlesen, Zeitungsartikel, Pollution
Pollution und Masturbation im Islam erlaubt?

Ich schäme mich sowas zu fragen, aber um ehrlich zu sein bin ich Moslem und bin 14 Jahre alt und männlich und ich habe immernoch nicht den Koran komplett durchgelesen..

Also, ich bin mir nicht sicher wie ich es sagen soll.. Ich Versuchs mal so, das man mich wenigstens versteht, also:

In letzter Zeit komme ich im Schlaf, also es kommen Spermien aus mir, wenn man das so sagen kann/darf. Es ist garnicht so lange her, da ist es 4 mal hintereinander passiert, deshalb habe ich mir gedacht ich Google einfach danach und jetzt habe ich herausgefunden das man so etwas auch Pollution nennt und das passiert wenn man zu lange nicht masturbiert hat.. Und da ich diese Pollution nicht wirklich mag, (mal vom 'feuchten' Traum ausgenommen xD') dass sowas seltener passiert wenn man masturbiert.. Und jetzt meine Frage an alle, die sich mit dem Islam auskennen (ich frage meine Familie natürlich nicht, besonders nicht bei solchen Themen die mit Pubertät und s*x zu tun haben) darf man im Islam unter solchen Umständen wie meinen masturbieren?

Es nervt ziemlich, wenn man jeden Tag bzw. Es ist noch schlimmer, jeden Morgen, obwohl ich so wie so Schlafmangel habe, sich zu duschen, insbesondere wenn man sich einen Tag vorher geduscht hat muss ich mich dann trotzdem wieder duschen.. :/ Außerdem habe ich immer Angst das jemand die Wäsche sieht und wenn da mal Flecken drauf sind das meine Mutter das sieht weil ich es in den Wäschekorb lege oder so..

Ich weiß es ist spät und hier kommen meistens nur blöde Fragen/Antworten aber das hier ist ernst gemeint, deshalb bitte ich auch um ernste Antworten, danke.

Islam, Selbstbefriedigung, Sexualität, feuchte-traeume, Muslime, Pollution

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