jetzt habe ich mir noch mal 10 euro raufgeladen... habe jetzt über 40 euro ausgegeben und was ist ?! kostenstopp funkioniert nich. Fonic ist betrug!!! Nicht holen!!

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jetzt habe ich durch internet noch 1 cent -.- ich dreh durch!!!!

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cola zero ?!

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essay korrigieren ...

dieses essay ist sehr sehr sehr sehr wichtig für meine englische Note deswegen würde ich mich sehr sehr freuen wenn ihr euch die Zeit nehmen würdet es ein mal zu korrigieren

With his sentence Carls Sandburg compares the life with an onion. He says they are similar because both of them have different layers which you have to peel off one by one and sometimes you cry by opening a layer. He means that the life are like the layers of an onion because you do not know what comes next and if the next part/layer of your life will be good or bad.

The novel “Holes” is a good example to explain this sentence. For everyone who is in Camp Green Lake this is a bewildering layer because they did not know this layer before and coeval a layer which make them cry.

The best examples for this comparison are the main characters Stanley and Hector because both of them had different layers in their life. Some of them were positive and some were negative. Stanley’s first layer which is mention in the novel is the time before he went to the camp. The second and bewildering layer is the camp. There were no signs before that this would happen in Stanley´s life. This is a proof that nobody knows which layers/parts come next in his life. His third layer is the time after the camp which is also surprising because actually he should stay there.

In Hectors life you can find different layers too. The first one is before he went to the camp. The second one is while the time in the camp and the third and most surprising one is after the camp. Hector had only layers past which “made him cry” and finally his life turns to the good.

I think the comparison of Carl Sandburg is absolutely correct because there are different and especially unexpected layers in my life too. I am sure that everyone has different layers in his life because in every life are modifications and that´s what the layers are. I think the word “bewildering!” makes Carl Sandburg´s sentence to a very good comparison because it is important that nobody can say how many layers he is going to have and how they will look. In my opinion Carl Sandburg´s comparison is very special but it is very applicable too. This will be clear for everybody who compares the sentence with the book “Holes” and after that with his own life.

Freue mich auf Hilfe die ich dringend brauch :D Gruß und danke danke danke im voraus :P

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würde mich über noch eine antwort sehr freuen :)

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macht eure Freundschaft nicht von einem Jungen abhängig, auch wenn einer von euch ihn "bekommt" ;)

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Ist nicht zu kurz

ich denke so wie ich wes mir vorstelle ist es nicht zu kurz ;)

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essay korrigiieren :S

nein das war keine Hausaufgabenfrage denn ich habe den text so weit wie möglich korrigiern wie es in meiner Macht steht und suche nur noch verbesserungsvorschlägen beziehungsweise fehler in grammar und spelling die euch auffallen. Ich bitte die Frage nicht erneut zu löschen ;)

With his sentence Carls Sandburg compares the life with an onion. He says they are similar because both of them have different layers which you have to peel off one by one and sometimes you cry by opening a layer. He means that the life are like the layers of an onion because you do not know what comes next and if the next part/layer of your life will be good or bad.

The novel “Holes” is a good example to explain this sentence. For everyone who is in Camp Green Lake this is a bewildering layer because they did not know this layer before and coeval a layer which make them cry.

The best examples for this comparison are the main characters Stanley and Hector because both of them had different layers in their life. Some of them were positive and some were negative. Stanley’s first layer which is mention in the novel is the time before he went to the camp. The second and bewildering layer is the camp. There were no signs before that this would happen in Stanley´s life. This is a proof that nobody knows which layers/parts come next in his life. His third layer is the time after the camp which is also surprising because actually he should stay there.

In Hectors life you can find different layers too. The first one is before he went to the camp. The second one is while the time in the camp and the third and most surprising one is after the camp. Hector had only layers past which “made him cry” and finally his life turns to the good.

I think the comparison of Carl Sandburg is absolutely correct because there are different and especially unexpected layers in my life too. I am sure that everyone has different layers in his life because in every life are modifications and that´s what the layers are. I think the word “bewildering!” makes Carl Sandburg´s sentence to a very good comparison because it is important that nobody can say how many layers he is going to have and how they will look. In my opinion Carl Sandburg´s comparison is very special but it is very applicable too. This will be clear for everybody who compares the sentence with the book “Holes” and after that with his own life.

Freue mich auf Hilfe die ich dringend brauch :D Gruß und danke danke danke im voraus :P

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würde mich über eine antwort sehr freuen :)

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Text für den Englisch unterricht korriegieren :))

hey, muss grad eine mappe in englisch anfertigen und wollte fragen ob ihr vllt diesen text ein mal korrekturlesen könntt (grammar, spelling) :

With this sentence is meant that a boy who did a crime in his life and is a “bad boy” is turning into a good boy with hard work every day. A similar method is often used in “boot camps”. It is an alternative for young offenders instead of going into the jail. The Juvenile Crimes are doing hard work to come on their physical and mental limits. Then they have to do therapies which are more effective after the hard work supporters are saying. But in Camp Green Lake are no therapies but just the very hard work. Because of this I think this method is not sensible. The hard work is just useful if the Persons also are doing therapies. In addition in my opinion it´s not very smart to let them do every day the same work because this makes the persons maniac sometime. Only positive point is that they perhaps aren´t doing a crime again because they are afraid of coming to such a camp again. Overall I don´t think that Camp Green Lake is a good place to punish persons. I think there are several possibilities to punish Juvenile Crimes. I think boot camps can be effective if the part of work is combined with the at least as important part of the therapies. But they have to be tested because they are often exploited. A Juvenile Detention is also sensible because the Juvenile Crimes can continue to go to special schools. So they can still make their graduation and starting a job after coming out of the jail. Another method which is very effective I think is to forbid them thinks which are in their own interest for example doing the driver license.

Danke im Voraus :))))

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ok danke danke :)))

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*voraus

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wahrscheinlich mag sie dich nicht wegen deinem schlechten deutsch ;)

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lieber nicht!

gruß

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