Hay also ich muss ein kurz Referat über School of the Air auf english machen und wollte fragen ob mir hier jemand bei meinen text tipps geben kann was da noch rein könnte weil der ziemlich kurz ist wie ich finde und glaube grammatisch ist er auch ziemlich schlecht :/

    School of the Air

The school of the air is a correspondence school for the primary and secondary education
of children who live in remote places  and in the outback of Australia. In these areas the  population is to small for a school.
On 8th June 1951 the first school of the Air lesson were officially broadcast from the Royal 
Flying doctor Service in Adelaide.There are  16 Schools of the air in australia the first   School of the air was built in Alice Springs.The School of Air in Alice Springs got a Visitor   Center that is open for tourists every day. There you can watch the morning broadcast from   the lessons
From 1951 to 2003 the teacher speaks to the students over shortwaveradios after that  they  switched to internet technologies to deliver lessons that include live videos.There are
        School of the air programmes in all states except Tasmania. Each student spends one hour    per day receiving group or individual lessons from the teacher,the rest of the day they     working through the     assigned materials with a parent,older sibling or a home stay  tutor.   The students get their homework through e-mails before that they get  the homework  from the post office together with books and other school stuff.Once a year the teachers    and     the students meet at a school camp for a week. There the studenst get intensive     lessons. the    most important thing in this week is that finally everybody can meet his classmates and     teachers.Studies have shown that such education has the same effect than traditional    methods of schooling.