Dezentrale Englisch Prüfung Talking about myself?

Hallo, würde mich freuen wenn jemand sich das mal drüber lesen könnte und mir Verbesserungsvorschläge machen könnte, bin mir nicht sicher ob das so gut formuliert ist

Danke schon mal im Vorfeld

My name is .......I am .....years old. I was born on the 15. of dezember ..... in ...... Now we live in ...... . We live in a nice house. The house has three floors. the lower and upper apartments were rented by a family and a company.Me and My Family live in the middle apartment. My Family consists of my mother ......, my father ......, my brothers .....and .:.., and my sisters .....and ....... My brother .......is 20 years old and my other brother ..... is 1 years old. ...... is 19 and ..... is 16 years old. My father works at landrasamt and my mother is a houswife. My parents emigrated from ..... to Germany at the age of fifteen. My favorite hobbies are swimming and badminting. I almost go swimming on saturday or sunday. I love to watch series. my favourite serie is the big bang theory .I play a lot of games on my Playstation. My favourite game is Fortnite. I can speak three languages German English and .... My first language is ..... . At school, my favorite subjects are math and english. In the future I would like to do the grade 10. I'am thinking about doing something with cars or electronics in the future.

ich weis nicht genau wie ich das beenden könnte vielleicht... that is mi Life ...

ps : ich muss 5 Minuten über mich sprechen

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