Hallo, brauche Hilfe. Kann jemand so nett sein und gucken ob dieser Text einigermaßen (9.klasse) in Ordnung ist.:

Mumbai is one of the most populated cities of the world. It is the largest, richest and fastest city if india

Mumbai's population is divided into two sections. On the one hand, there live the wealthy and well-paid people, on the other hand, many people live there in slums are poor and can even afford to live just a little bungalow.

A big advantage in the city, are the attractions. There you can view the artworks of this unique culture. the culture is in buildings, roads and human recognizable.

However, there are also negative aspects that speak against this city. For example, slums are not a good outlook as a tourist. The poor people, poor children and beggars would adversely affect the tourist.

By and large, is mumbai a very interesting city. As a tourist you will discover there a lot and can learn new things.

Kann mir jemand (wäre nett ;) ) Verbesserungsvorschläge und Fehler beheben.

Lg