Hallo liebe Community, ich habe morgen eine mündliche Prüfung und ich muss mich selber vorstellen. Es wäre sehr nett wenn das einer kontrollieren würde ob die Reihenfolge stimmt oder es in der richtigen zeit geschrieben wurde usw (Grammatik,länge..) Hier mein Text:

My name is Max. I am 19 years old. I born in Nürnberg. My nationalty is german. I live with my family in a flat. My strengthen are creative and reliable. I have a brother he is 10 years old. My father is banker and my my mother is housewife. My hobbies are playing football and playin pc games. My future plans for the next 20 years is, first I must get my A level (Abitur), then i study medicine for 4 years. If my study gets end I want marry and raise a family. I introduce have 3 childs, 2 girls and a boy. My favourite holiday was in the Malediven, bevause the beach ist beatiful. My worst experience was in my turkey holiday, because that was very boring with my family. If i would the Präsident of the USA, I would allow drive a car with 18.

Danke schonmal 😄