Guten Abend...da ich meine Probleme hab in Sachen Summary würde ich gerne ein paar tipps von euch hören um Struktur/Wortwahl etc. bzw verbesserungsvorschläge.

Das ist der Text den ich bearbeiten muss. http://www.thestar.com/news/investigations/immigration/article/901584--so-you-think-you-know-everything-about-canada-eh

Summary: The next citizenship test written by Raveena Aulakh in December 2010 deals with the topic of harder rest for Canadian immigrants.

It will be new and difficulty citizenship test introduced. The outraged Canadians discuss internet on radio and tv shows about the test, they think many of immigrants have been passed the old citizenship because it was too easy and the answers were simply to memorizing learning. At first the test will be difficulty and many immigrants failed on the lessons to 30%. Officials revised the old rules of the test and make it a little bit easier than the default rate was by 20%. Canadians also only have the test done with 90% (18/20 questions) . Many of the Canadian test persons failed on the same question it is that tripped up almost everyone was on who can vote in federal elections. Every year 150000 immigrants take the test, each of the failed can retry the test.