Ich habe einfach ein paar Rechtschreibefehler gefunden.
Our class went on a trip, on which everybody could have lots of fun. Last Monday we went on a very interesting Safari. The safari park was in Düsseldorf. We drove there by a travelbus for an hour. We went on this trip to get to know eachother better. We went there with the whole class. It was super, because we saw almost every animal from crocodiles to lions. The best animals of all are the lions, because they're so big and they roar very loud. We all learned that animals aren't toys to play with.
It was the best trip I've done with my school this year!
(Ich bin zwar selber eine Schülerin, also kann mich natürlich jeder korrigieren!)