Hallo,ich schreibe morgen eine Englisch Arbeit und wir müssen unter anderem eine Argumentation über die Todesstrafe ( Death Penalty ) schreiben. Ich hab eine geschrieben ich bin mir aber nichts sicher ob das so ok ist. Könnt mir jemand vielleicht helfen ?? Danke im Voraus!

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Today I would like to tell something about death penalty which still exists in some parts of the world. It's for murderers or people who have comitted other bad crimes. Relating to this I would like to explain my opinion.

On the one hand I think it's a fair punishment for rapists. They rape others and damage the life of the victims. As a punishment they only get arrested for some years, which is too mild. Furthermore their psyche is already damaged and if they then get arrested, they'll be crazy when they leave the prison. Maybe they'll rape again. You must also not forget that the death penalty is cheap in comparison with the prison because you don't have to pay the maintenance of the criminal.Another argument for the death penalty is that it scares people off. If for example someone gets killed all the others would premiditate whether they will commit a crime too.On the other hand it's irreversible. That means it's possible that you kill the wrong person. If you realize that it was the wrong one you're not able to do anything. Moreover you should think logical. Even if you kill someone the victim is still dead so the situation doesn't change.

To put it in a nutshell I think the death penalty is a doubtful penalty because you may decrease the number of criminals but you take the life of a person which is inhumane.

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