Hey musste eine Hausaufgabe über das Thema "Friendship" schreiben, nun ist meine Frage, ob jemand so freundlich wäre und meinen Text nachgucken und eventuell berichtigen könnte Wäre gut wenn dies heute Abend noch verbessert wird, da ich den Text bis morgen brauche.
Friends are a very important for me, because you can talk with them about problems or other things, you can ride with them in the holidays, do sport and you can trust your friends. My longest friendship is since 15 years. My best friends is my neighbour he's name is Tobias and he's really tall and got blond curly hair. He has a great sense of humor and is very easy-going. He hasn't got a girlfriend but would really like one. His real name is Tobias but everybody called him Tobi. Tobi is 16 years old. Alot of friends are in my school and few of my friends live in my villiage in Berlin. A lot of my friends have the same hobbies and interests as me. We go together to the gym, play tennis or drive with our scooter. I, my twin brother and my best friend spend much time together. We've built two shacks and a tree house together - thats funny!
Sollte einer so nett sein, und sich die Mühe machen, den Text zu berichtigen, wäre ich dankbar, wenn er die Fehler makieren würde
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