hey, ich hab das nachts geschrieben und will jetzt eine Meinung haben und bitte Verbesserungsvorschläge wie Verse anders gehen, falls euch was nicht gefällt. Danke :)
"Never Let Me Go"[Verse 1]
I’m drowning in an endless sea,
A weight so heavy, pulling me.
No stars to guide, no shore in sight,
I’m trapped in this eternal night.
Lost my friends along the way,
They couldn’t hear the words I’d say.
Every breath’s a battle, a fight to stay,
But I’m still here, just one more day.
[Pre-Chorus]
The world is cold, the pain’s so real,
But broken hearts can learn to heal.
Though the shadows drag me low,
A voice reminds me, I’m not alone.
[Chorus]
And when I fall, you’re always there,
Through the darkness, you repair.
You pull me up, you hold me tight,
You are my beacon in the night.
I’ll never let you go,
You’re the light I’ll always know.
[Verse 2]
The mirror shows a fractured face,
A soul that’s lost in empty space.
Life’s a fight to just survive,
But you remind me I’m alive.
You’ve seen me crumble, seen me break,
Yet stayed through every past mistake.
Your love’s the rope, my saving grace,
You bring me hope in this dark place.
[Pre-Chorus]
The world is cruel, the pain won’t fade,
But you remind me I’m not afraid.
Though I stumble, though I fall,
You’re the one who answers my call.
[Chorus]
And when I fall, you’re always there,
Through the darkness, you repair.
You pull me up, you hold me tight,
You are my beacon in the night.
I’ll never let you go,
You’re the light I’ll always know.
[Bridge]
Even in the darkest hour,
You give me strength, you give me power.
When the storm tears through my soul,
You’re the piece that makes me whole.
[Outro]
So thank you, my dearest friend,
For being there, for helping mend.
I’d be lost without your light,
You’ve saved me in my endless fight.
I’ll never let you slip away,
You’re my hope on the hardest days.
For you, I’ll keep on pushing through,
My heart will always belong to you.
Ist es leider nicht :( trd danke !