Kann mir jemand hierbei helfen?

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Young people today can hardly imagine how difficult life was before the invention of the mobile phone. …, every telephone was permanently attached to a wall socket. If someone rang the doorbell, …, you had to interrupt your conversation in order to go to the door. …, outside the house it was even worse. …, if you wanted to make a call you had to find a phone box. … there was already a queue of people standing outside the box, or you didn't have the exact change you needed to make the call. …, the telephone was out of order, and you had to search for another one. …, the landline telephone was an invention of limited usefulness, and I can't imagine many people regret that it has all but vanished.

Ich habe das so gemacht, aber bin mir da nicht so sicher:

Young people today can hardly imagine how difficult life was before the invention of the mobile phone.  First of all, every telephone was permanently attached to a wall socket. If someone rang the doorbell, possibly , you had to interrupt your conversation in order to go to the door.  But outside the house it was even worse. For example, if you wanted to make a call you had to find a phone box. Perhaps, there was already a queue of people standing outside the box, or you didn't have the exact change you needed to make the call. For one thing, the telephone was out of order, and you had to search for another one. All in all, the landline telephone was an invention of limited usefulness, and I can't imagine many people regret that it has all but vanished.

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Ist dieser englische Text soweit richtig?

Ich bin wirklich grauenhaft in englisch. Könnte jemand da nochmal überschauen und ggf. korrigieren. Ich bekomme hier die Krise.

Die Aufgabe war einen 4 tägigen trip zu erstellen.

Danke :)

Day one: 

The trip begins at the south entrance of the New York central park. 

There are many Squirrels you can try too feed. 

In the middle of the park is a sea with ducks that you are not allowed to feed.

The next target is the Central Park Zoo, you can find the right route by looking at the sings.

A tour through the zoo without attraction lasts approximately one hour.

You can see your next destination from the Park.

Next we go to the Empire state building. 

This is the highes building of America with 381m. 

The entry kost 55 Dollar. 

After that you go to the times square. 

It’s the most beautiful in the evening, because the lights are very bright then. 

The times square is the fullest at new years eve. 

There is the beautifulest firework you will ever seen. 

Day two:

The day begins at the „Rockefeller Center“.

There you can iceskating in the cold month or rollerskating in the warm month. 

The next stop is the Edge. 

On the roof of this building, you have a beautiful view above the whole city. 

If you like Museum, you can visit the Intrepid Sea-Air-Space Museum.

There you can see some aircraft and submarine. 

At next you visit the Riverside Park. You can find there the Hamilton Fountain and the Eleanor Roosevelt Memorial. 

If you walk across the park you come to the George Washington bridge. 

Day three:

Your third day starts at the coney island park.

There is a big aquarium with a tunnel where the fish swim above you.

Last but noch least, you go in the Mermaid spa to relax well. 

Day four: 

Your last day begins in the Whole Foods marked in Brooklyn.

There you can see lots of food culture of America. 

After that much food, you go to the Brooklyn bridge park for the perfect view of the Brooklyn bride. 

Your last highlight of this trip is the Manhattan mall. 

This is the perfect spot to go shopping. 

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