9klasse englisch HA--Traumberuf

Ich muss für morgen einen Text über meinen Traumberuf schreiben und wollte fragen ob das so richtig ist?

My dream job to be a actor.I like to play different charters and be on a stage.The attentiveness who give the people you is wonderful.In the job you must by heart many scrips. Also you must be openminded for new things. Sometimes you must play with people who you not like,but you must be cool and friendly and take the plunge and adapt.The best thing in the job is when the act are ready and you play it on a stage for many people and after the show all people applaud for you.

1 Antwort

Dilan159

18.12.2014, 15:32

I like to play different charters and to stay on a stage.The attentiveness who give the people you is wonderful(???) In this job you must by heart many scrips. Also you have to be openminded for new things. Sometimes you must play with people who you do not like,but you must be cool and friendly and take the plunge and adapt.The best thing in the job is when the act are ready and you play it on a stage for many people and after the show all people applaud for you.

Ähnliche Fragen

Englisch text ,,My Dream Job”?

Hallo, ich wollte mal fragen wie der Text ist und was man verbessern könnte. Danke im Voraus:)

In my opinion, the profession of an actor is a dream job because you have the possibility to embody the language, facial expressions and gestures of another Person.

If you want to work as a actor you must be a creative, confident,Imaginative, open and funny person because you have to play your role clearly.

I imagine working on the set and with other people would bevery, very exciting and varied as there is always something to laugh about when a scene does not succeed immediately.

Futhermore is glamorous movie premieres, high salaries and enormous popularity a good aspect to be a actor.

the job would be suitable for me because I am an open minded, self-confident and creative person who loves to work with other people.

...zur Frage

Englisch, Argumentation, Verbessern?

Hallo, ich schreibe morgen eine Arbeit und habe schon ein paar Argumentationen geschrieben. Heute hat meine Lehrerin einen Hinweis auf das Thema gegeben: Volunteer work. Ich habe dann einfach mal eine Argumentation dazu geschrieben. Wahrscheinlich kommt nicht nur Volunteer work dran, aber es wäre toll, wenn ich schon eine gute Grundlage habe. Ich weiß das ich bestimmt ein paar Grammatische Fehler habe.

Volunteer work is a important for the poor, disadvantaged groups or teenagers (youth centre) or generel the society, but also people don't like this kind of work, why? Is volunteer work useful? Mostly volunteer work deal with people, for example you ask for donation, like money, eat or clothes. Subsequently people don't like this question, because they think its annoying or maybe the organisation is not serious. In the past some organisations has use the money for his own and now people aren't sure, if the organisation approved or serious. Thats why you can feel depressed, because you do this at your free time and you are not paid for your work. On the one hand, people don't like your work, but on the other hand you can help the society, also when some people don't honor your work, but it gives also people, who think thats a good job and honourable. Furthermore you can feel good by your own and you can say, you help people who needs help and don't see away (nicht weg sehen?). Additionally you can gain experience for a job or the life. In a CV it looks very good. So also your character can be better, for example you know the real problems, like no food or money to live. Then you see, thats your problems are nothing in comparison with this problems. Finally in my opinion volunteer work is important and I do this also and when somebody say something bad about your work. Ignor this! There more people who like it and especially the people who need your work.

Ich würde mich auf eine Antwort freuen und ich weiß eure Mühe zu schätzen, wenn ihr es korrigiert und mir vielleicht ein paar Tipps geben könnt. Ich hoffe es antwortet noch jemand heute. Aber trotzdem danke!

...zur Frage

Englisch Aufsatz okay?

Ich gehe in die 9. Klasse & bin Realschüler. Wir müssen in Englisch einen Aufsatz über unseren Traumberuf schreiben, habt ihr villt. Verbesserunsvorschläge? ^^

My dream profession

My dream profession is to work in a hospital as a children's nurse. I want to do this job because I like to help children. For this job you must be mentally stable (psychisch belastbar), responsible (verantwortungsbewusst) and careful. In this profession you care and watch babies, sick children and young people. You have to work on weekends and in shifts. You work in nursing homes, children's hospitals, university hospitals and medical practices (Facharztpraxen). For this job you must wear a special uniform. Important school subjects are biology, chemistry, mathematics, physics and German. In my opinion, the pay is good. You deserve between 2338 and 2770 euro in a Month. Not so good is, that you had to stand for a long time but I think that's no problem for me.

...zur Frage

Schreibe morgen Englisch Schularbeit, brauche Hilfe?

Also bei der Schularbeit muss ich einen Text schreiben und meine bitte wäre es, ob Ihr sie mir verbessern/korrigieren könntet. Ich weiß natürlich, dass dieser Plattform nicht um Hausaufgaben verbessern da ist. ABER ES IST SEHR WICHTIG FÜR MICH

DANKE IM VORAUS.......

Hello everybody,

Today I will tell you about the social media. As you know for fifteen years ago Google was a small web search engine and Facebook didn’t exist. There are so many social media for example Facebook, Instagram, Twitter, and so on. I think social media can get to know people and be friends with them. I personally only use Instagram, because you can only post photos and videos in Instagram. It is used by 150 million people. If you are bored, I think that social media is well suited.

...zur Frage

Englisch Hausaufgaben (evt. berichtigen) über work-life-balance?

Work-life balance is a concept for the People to split their time and energy between work and the other important aspects of their life. There is no ideal balance, everyone is different and must find his own work life balance. The right balance for you when you are single will be different when you marry, or if you have children. The right balance for you today will probably be different for you tomorrow. Work-life balance is a daily effort to make time for family, friends, personal growth, and other personal activities.

...zur Frage

Englisch Sätze Halloween?

Hey, meine Lehrerin hat uns eine Hausaufgabe gegeben und zwar: „What do I think of Halloween“
Ich habe jetzt angefangen mit

„I think in Halloween somebody Must have a scary costume. Also a bag for the candy. But you must pay attention because it can be scary because it is so dark and they are not many people outside.“

Hättet ihr weitere Ideen? & ist es überhaupt wichtig brauche 7 Sätze.

...zur Frage

Strict Parents, gut so?

Ich muss in der Schule einen kleinen Aufsatz in English schreiben. Habe ihn auch soweit fertig, nur mein Englisch ist nicht das Beste. wäre schön wenn jemand mal rübergucken könnte :)

The topic is about, strict parents help me to grow up right. At first, you must define strict parents. For me strict parents give you rules and you must keep the rules. Some important fact is that you have a good nourisched. To have rules is good for you so you can learn to abide by a deal, for example when you are late by your job, you can be sacked on the spot. An other reason for that you get manners. They don’t buy all for you, so you don’t be spoiled. You must help in the household so you will be independently. Negatives sides that’s not so good for the mental health sometimes or the kids will push to much. In conclusion I can say my parents taught me that you have to work hard to get what you want. Sometimes you'll have to follow rules that you don't like. And they are right. I think, if you have strict parents you are better at school, you get a good job, you have a better future and you have a healthy live.

Vlt. hat auch noch jemand ne Idee was man zusätzlich schreiben könnte?

...zur Frage

Könnte jemand meine englische Hausaufgabe korrigieren?

Ich sollte einen Essay schreiben. Vielen Dank für deine Hilfe ! :)

Always live for the moment and never worry about tomorrow.

Many people claim that you should live for the moment and not care about the next day‘s problem.

Firstly, it is nice to enjoy the life and don’t be worried about the consequences but on the long run you can’t achieve anything with this mindset. If you have dreams you should be conscious about your present. Secondly, before acting is recommended to think about the consequences. Without consideration your future can be destroyed easily.

On the other hand, overthinking is a huge phenomena . It provokes fears and anxiety. Even though you have wants you don’t take any steps to achieve them because you are afraid of people’s opinion. This approach makes you numb.

In my opinion, the best thing you can do is the find the middle way. You can enjoy the life without making blunders if you act at your discretion.

...zur Frage

Royal Flying Doctors Service----

           Royal Flying Doctors Service

The Royal Flying Doctors Service or short RFDS is a health care service for people in Australia who live in the outback. It is a not- for- profit organisation which provides health care to people who are unable to access a hospital or general practice because of the vast distances of the Outback. They come by plane and help the people or in many cases they also provide telephone or radio medical advice to them. RFDS is working 24 hours the whole year. The Royal Flying Doctor Service supports virtually all low populated areas of Australia. It can arrive each person of Australia within two hours. It has 53 planes at 21 bases across the country. Almost thousand people work there, a professional team. They using the latest in aviation, medical and communications technology, it has four operational sections, South Eastern, Central, Western and Queensland. Each section has a number of bases. Royal Flying Doctors Service helps people for over 80 years. The first flight was 1928. They supported by the Commonwealth, State and Territory Governments. The donations will be used in several ways to help the thousands of people who live, work and travel in Australia. People who are not affirmed must pay for treatment themselves. People who are affirmed don’t have to pay for treatment themselves.

ist das so richtig geschrieben? vielen dank im voraus!!!

...zur Frage

Ist das eine gute persuasive essay (Englisch Ersatzleistung Klasse 7 )?

Why you should play tennis 🎾

Tennis is a wonderful sport and I think more people should play it. There are many reasons why people should play tennis. The first reason is that tennis is a great way to make new friends. You can easily go to the park or a tennis court and just ask someone if she or he would like to play some tennis with you and become friends with her or him. Another important thing is that tennis is a lifetime sport. I’ve seen 65 year old people still playing pretty well. Think about it this way, when you are old would you rather spend your hole life in front of a small window in a retirement home ? Or would you rather enjoy your life, by playing tennis and having fun? You’re probably still thinking that tennis is like any other sport and and that it’s nothing special. But do you know that tennis reduces stress. People who play tennis can deal with physical, mental and emotional challenges, which also helps to deal with stress. Soccer players can also deal with physical problems but they can’t deal with mental and emotional challenges. Because as a soccer player you are in a team and sharing the pain with the others. Tennis players are on their own and if they lose it's their fault. Not the fault of the others, only their own fault. It's like when a soccer player gets the blame from the hole team for losing the match. I also play tennis. I love this sport because after you have lost you work even harder than before and whether your next match is a loss or a victory you will feel the hard work you put into it. Tennis not only strengthens your mentality, it also makes your body stronger and you can live longer, get fitter and improve your hand eye coordination through this sport. An hour of singles play can burn 580-870 calories and if you have 3 hours of training every week, you will even live longer! The fifth reason to play tennis is that tennis improves your brain power. it has been proven that the more you repeat an activity, the stronger the neural connections in your brain will become. So when you play tennis, for which you need critical thinking and quick movements, you are improving your planning, tactical, agility, and coordination skills. Finally, the most important reason is that tennis teaches you a lot of lessons. Every tennis match is a small life lesson. It teaches you about hard work and how to believe in yourself. Through independence , endurance, confidence and determination, tennis teaches you how to be successful. I hope my text persuaded you! And hopefully I’ll see you on the tennis court one day!

...zur Frage

Erörterung/Comment english zap zp gut?!

Schreibe am Donnerstag meine Englisch zap jnd würde gerne wissen ob das eine gute Erörterung ist. Bitte bewertet es inhaltlich und sprachlich. Und was ist verbessern könnte. Ist echt wichtig. Wäre euch echt dankbar Thema : Rauchverbot ja oder nein

Nowadays many people think that smoking should be forbidden. Is that right ? There are many reasons for and against.

The first point is that it is like toxic for people when they smoke. Moreover a lot of guys smoke outside where many other people are. It could be that they smoke passive and it is quite worser than smokes active. But then we can forbid it only on places where are many people.

The reason is that if we banned smoking all companys become poor and million lose their jobs.

But the mainly point is that the state earn fewer money, because they get less tax and they need money for different causes. That is why they must raise the land tax. At worst ih can be that the economic system crash.

After looking both sides I must say that it could be very dangerous to banned smoking. The only thing that we could do is not to allowed it when children are near the smoker to safe them.

...zur Frage

englischarbeit child labour

ich bitteee um verbesserrung meines textes, ich wäre echt sher dankbaar..:D

Child Labour I think Child Labour is a very important and seriously topic.The kids must be work in very badly trouble. They must be work on the cold and hard floor and under a large pressure. First i would say that i'm strict against child labour. Its endager the health of the childrens very much. The work damaged their back and legs.childs who must be work in coal mines had problems witzh their lungs too. In addition the kids became emotional problems. Itsvery sadly that the kids dont have the chance to live his childhood. Durring other kids aregoing to the cinema or playing footbal, they must be produced us footballs for example. They pay is very bad too and the ware who is produced by the children be sale ever more than the double, that the childrens became for they work. Perhaps its a advantage for the employer, becouse childrens are work faster and are cheaper labor, but its a very big disadvantage for the childrens and later their childrens.

ICH HOFFE JEMAND HILFT MIR..... :( BIN NICHT BERADE GUITT WIE IHR SIEHT :SS

...zur Frage

Englisch?

"Did you ever catch yourself living in the past and losing focus on reality and presence? To some extent, it's totally normal to reflect upon great memories and experiences, but there are also some boundaries: If you are craving about the past rather than enjoying the here and now, this will lead to you always being unhappy with yourself and your surroundings. I am here to tell you that the past is there to remind you of all the great experiences you have had in your life, but you can't stick to them life-long . Even beautiful things have their ends, and you need to realize that. Just because your life goes on or some things have changed in your life, making that experience not relivable, it does not necessarily mean that your life will never be as great as it was. And remember: Maybe you are missing out on great people while crying over your best friend you lost and who was never good for you. All the changes you face are meant to occur. Despite all the shifts, there is someone who will always stay and never betray you: That's you and yourself! So don't stick to the past and other people if there are thousands of miles you need to discover before life really ends for you. Enjoy every minute and be grateful for having food, clean water, nice people, and a comfy place to live in!"

Wie kann ich den Text noch sprachlich verbessern?

...zur Frage

Kann mir das jemand von Englisch auf Deutsch übersetzen?

"You see, things aren't sequential. Good doesn't lead to good, nor bad to bad. People who steal, don't get caught, live the good life. Others lie, cheat and get elected. Some people stop to help a stranded motorist and get taken out by a speeding semi. There's no accounting for it. How you play the cards your dealt, that's all that matters."

...zur Frage

Was möchtest Du wissen?

Deine Frage stellen