englisch summary korrekturlesen?
wäre sehr nett
The article „Eigtheen-year-old mayor may be youngest in US“ written by unknown and published in 2006, deals with Sam Juhl, an 18 year old guy from Roland, Iowa, who was elected mayor on November 3, 2006 as the title suggests.
Two years ago, nobody ran to be the mayor, so he decided to ran for office himself, which worked out. With about 48 percent he won. For that reason, that he is a hard-working people, his friends think he will do many great things for Roland.
Sam Juhl is a positive-minded having a great attitude towards life. He is studying parliamentary procedure. His first city council meeting Monday in front of 35 people went very well and he also let five-member council through the meeting in 40 minutes. He made only one mistake when he went on the next agenda without hearing any comments from the council.
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The article „Eigtheen-year-old mayor may be youngest in US“ written by unknown and published in 2006 (kein Komma) deals with Sam Juhl, an 18 year old (RS) guy from Roland, Iowa, who was elected mayor on November 3, 2006 as the title suggests (an den Satzanfang oder ganz weglassen).
Two years ago (Wort; Grammatik), nobody ran (Grammatik) to be (---) mayor, so he decided to ran (Grammatik) for office himself, which worked out. With about 48 percent he won. (Satzstellung) For that reason, that (Formulierung, Grammatik) he is a hard-working people (Grammatik), his friends think he will do many great things for Roland.
Sam Juhl is a positive-minded having a great attitude towards life. He is studying parliamentary procedure. His first city council meeting (Hier fehlt eine Präposition.) Monday in front of 35 people (Ort vor Zeit) went very well and he also let (Wort)(Hier fehlt ein Artikel.) five-member council through the meeting in 40 minutes. He made only one mistake when he went on the next agenda (Das ergibt keinen Sinn.) without hearing (???) any comments from the council.
Das Fettgedruckte muss korrigiert werden. Ich hoffe, ich habe nichts übersehen.
Für das Vokabular und die Rechtschreibung empfehle ich ein gutes (online) Wörterbuch, z.B. pons.com,
für die Grammatik ego4u.de und englisch-hilfen.de - und Finger weg vom Google Übelsetzer und seinen tr.tteligen Kollegen!
:-) AstridDerPu
