Englisch Bildbeschreibung - So richtig?

This photo was taken in Australia on the beach. Maybe it is in the summer. In the middle of the picture are three beach umbrellas. Under the beach umbrellas are some people. They are sitting next to the sea. In the water there are some waves and many people. In the background you can see many trees and hotels. 
(Bild unten :) )

Brauche unbedingt Tipps - wir schreiben bald eine Arbeit und ich lerne gerade dafür (bin in Klasse 9)

Answer 1

[scallawags]

This photo was taken [This picture has been taken] in Australia [right] on the beach. Maybe it is [during] ... summer. In the middle [center] of the picture [you will see] three beach umbrellas. Under the beach umbrellas are some [several] people. They are sitting next to the sea. In the water there are [There are quite] some waves and many people [in the water]. In the background you can [will] see many trees and hotels. 
(Bild unten :) )