Englisch, übersetzen, schöner formulieren?

Hallo ist der Satz

"Knowing your work, I am very happy that we will have the opportunity to discuss the essay"

"I won't be available on the week of 9th June, and I assume that you will be in Los Angeles the week after that, I would like to ask you If we could have the meeting End of June"

Das soll eine Geschäftsemail werden, aber ich finde es nicht so schön. Ist es grammatikalisch richtig und könnt ihr mir eine schönere Formulierung empfehlen?

4 Antworten

bileh49768

20.04.2022, 18:25

Das ist ein super schlechtes Englisch! Ich weiß nicht, was Sie zu sagen versuchen, aber sagen Sie es auf Deutsch und verwenden Sie einen Online-Übersetzer, um eine perfekte englische Entsprechung zu erhalten. Wir schreiben das Jahr 2022!

“Having got to know your work, I would appreciate the opportunity to discuss the essay [with you].”

ararla

Fragesteller

20.04.2022, 18:26

Ist es sehr schlecht?

earnest

20.04.2022, 19:41

@ararla

Der Nutzer überzieht in seiner Kritik.

Picea007xyz

21.04.2022, 08:09

@ararla

dict.leo.org nehmen.

AstridDerPu

20.04.2022, 18:41

Es gibt keine perfekten Online-Übersetzer, auch wenn wir das Jahr 2022 schreiben.

Koernchen79

21.04.2022, 08:10

@AstridDerPu

deepl ist ganz gut

earnest

20.04.2022, 19:39

Dieser völlig negativen Beurteilung vermag ich nicht zuzustimmen.

Was daran ist denn "super schlechtes Englisch"?

PS: Auch im Jahr 2022 machen Übersetzungsprogramme noch Fehler.

ararla

Fragesteller

20.04.2022, 19:44

@earnest

Was für eine Formulierung würden Sie empfehlen?

earnest

20.04.2022, 19:46

@ararla

Weniger kumpelhaft/umgangssprachlich.

Aber ich kenne die Umstände nicht.

ararla

Fragesteller

20.04.2022, 19:49

@earnest

Ja es ist so umgangssprachlich. Können Sie mir eine andere Formulierung vorschlagen (Geschäftsschreiben)

earnest

20.04.2022, 19:50

@ararla

Ich melde mich nach der Tagesschau.

;-)

earnest

20.04.2022, 20:29

@earnest

Vorschlag:

...

I am glad that you will have the time for our discussion of the essay. I will not be available from... to... (bitte einsetzen). Assuming that you will be in Los Angeles after that (falls das so gemeint ist), I would suggest meeting at the end of June. Would that be convenient for you?

...

earnest

21.04.2022, 09:50

@earnest

Vielen Dank übrigens, dass du dich so nett bei mir für meinen Vorschlag bedankt hast...

ararla

Fragesteller

21.04.2022, 10:46

@earnest

Dankee

Traconias

Nutzer, der sehr aktiv auf gutefrage ist

im Thema Sprache

21.04.2022, 08:19

I know your work and so I'm glad to have the opportunity to discuss (your/my) essay.

I won't be available during the week around June 9th, yet I assume that you will be in Los Angeles the following week. So I would like to ask you for a meeting later in June.

+++

Bei dem Essay würde ich das Possessivpronomen einsetzen; welches, musst du entscheiden.

"Ende Juni" wirkt als Vorschlag unlogisch, wenn es um die (folgende) Woche ab dem 12.06. geht.

SakuraPeachie

21.04.2022, 08:19

"Knowing your work, I am very happy that we will have the opportunity to discuss the essay. I won't be available between 9th and 15th June and I assume that you will be in Los Angeles the week after that. Therefore I would like to ask you if we could have the meeting towards the end of June."

AstridDerPu

Von gutefrage auf Grund seines Wissens auf einem Fachgebiet ausgezeichneter Nutzer

Englisch, Sprache

20.04.2022, 18:39

Hallo,

Knowing your work, I am very happy that we will have the opportunity to discuss the essay (Hier fehlt ein Punkt.)

I won't (Solche Kurzformen sollte man in formellen Schreiben und Geschäftskorrespondenz meiden.) be available on the week of 9th June, and I assume that you will be in Los Angeles the week after that, I would like to ask you If we could have the meeting (Hier fehlen eine Präposition und der bestimmte Artikel.) End (RS) of June (Hier fehlt ein Punkt.)

Das Fettgedruckte muss korrigiert werden. Ich hoffe, ich habe nichts übersehen.

Für das Vokabular und die Rechtschreibung empfehle ich ein gutes (online) Wörterbuch, z.B. pons.com,

für die Grammatik ego4u.de und englisch-hilfen.de - und Finger weg vom Google Übelsetzer und seinen tr.tteligen Kollegen!

:-) AstridDerPu

ararla

Fragesteller

20.04.2022, 18:41

Aber ist das schön formuliert, also würde es dann passen?

AstridDerPu

20.04.2022, 18:43

@ararla

Schönheit liegt im Auge des Betrachters! Beauty is in the eye of the beholder.

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