Defining relative clauses?
Aufgabe b) Würdet ihr was an meiner Lösung verändern/verbessern?
Meine Lösung: In my first job, I was part of a student team that organised social activities at a summer school. The office that I worked in was very noisy and fun, but there was one quiet boy who never joined in. I decided he was far too serious for me! The first job that they gave me was to design some posters for a theme party, but, of course, I was so busy joking around that the posters that I designed were full of mistakes. The quiet boy, Mark, was the only person who he showed me and he helped me to correct things before anyone noticed. I liked the friendship that realised it and Mark and I are still friends now! There are a lot of things that we like doing together, especially stuff on our smartphones.
1 Antwort
Hallo,
- Bei 6 und 7 hast du falsch ausgefüllt. Übersetze die beiden Sätze, dann erkennst du, dass sie mit den Einsetzungen keinen Sinn ergeben.
- Wo sind die Klammern mit den Relativpronomen, die du auslassen kannst?
AstridDerPu
Die Klammern setze ich hinterher. Stimmen jetzt erstmal alle meine defining relative clauses?
In my first job, I was part of a student team that organised social activities at a summer school. The office that I worked in was very noisy and fun, but there was one quiet boy who never joined in. I decided he was far too serious for me! The first job that they gave me was to design some posters for a theme party, but, of course, I was so busy joking around that the posters that I designed were full of mistakes. The quiet boy, Mark, was the only person that realised it and he helped me to correct things before anyone noticed. I liked the friendship who he showed me and Mark and I are still friends now! There are a lot of things that we like doing together, especially stuff on our smartphones.
I liked the friendship who he (Das ist falsch.) showed me and Mark and I are still friends now!
Jap, habe ich vorher entdeckt. Sonst ist alles richtig?
Zur Frage, wann man das Relativpronomen weglassen kann (das ist aber kein Muss!):
Man kann das Relativpronomen weglassen, wenn es Objekt des Relativsatzes ist. Einen Relativsatz ohne Relativpronomen nennt man auch contact clause.
Ist das Relativpronomen dagegen Subjekt des Relativsatzes - in diesem Fall steht das Verb direkt hinter dem Relativpronomen - kann man das Relativpronomen nicht weglassen.
So? In my first job, I was part of a student team (that) organised social activities at a summer school. The office (that) I worked in was very noisy and fun, but there was one quiet boy who never joined in. I decided he was far too serious for me! The first job (that) they gave me was to design some posters for a theme party, but, of course, I was so busy joking around that the posters (that) I designed were full of mistakes. The quiet boy, Mark, was the only person (that) realised it and he helped me to correct things before anyone noticed. I liked the friendship (that) he showed me and Mark and I are still friends now! There are a lot of things (that) we like doing together, especially stuff on our smartphones.
Falsch sind:
- I was part of a student team (that) organised
- Mark, was the only person (who) realised
AstridDerPu
Also beim ersten muss that ohne Klammer stehen und beim zweiten muss in die Klammer who?
In beiden Fällen keine Klammer und im 2. Satz heißt das relative pronoun who.
Jetzt stimmt alles? In my first job, I was part of a student team that organised social activities at a summer school. The office (that) I worked in was very noisy and fun, but there was one quiet boy who never joined in. I decided he was far too serious for me! The first job (that) they gave me was to design some posters for a theme party, but, of course, I was so busy joking around that the posters (that) I designed were full of mistakes. The quiet boy, Mark, was the only person who realised it and he helped me to correct things before anyone noticed. I liked the friendship (that) he showed me and Mark and I are still friends now! There are a lot of things (that) we like doing together, especially stuff on our smartphones.
Ja, so ist es richtig. Du weißt schon, dass du ab dem 04.10. ohne meine Hilfe auskommen musst, nicht wahr?
Jap, weiß ich. Vielen Dank für deine Hilfe 🙏🏻
Warum ist "that" nicht korrekt? Wegen der Singular/Gruppenplural -Sache?
Habe noch einen Fehler entdeckt in meinem korrigierten Text. Trotzdem Dankeschön!