Wir müssen morgen für die Schule einen Englisch Text schreiben, und ich wollte einfach mal fragen, ob dieser Text gut ist. Es soll um eine Piraten Geschichte gehen, und weil mein English nicht das beste ist, wollte ich fragen, ob ich hier noch etwas ausbessern könnte ^-^

In the evening, when I want to go to the bed, I heard a very loud noise outside. I looked out off the window, but there was nothing. I go back to the bed, but the, suddenly I heard a new, louder noise outside. Suddenly, the windows was broken and they kidnapped me. I can't see where they go, because they blindfolding me. After a long time, some people are crying, I don’t know what happened, but suddenly the blindfold falls down and I could see something. I saw a attractive lady and also saw where I am. I was on a pirate ship. I was very afraid, because I don't know what they want from me, but suddenly I heard something like a sword fight. I really like adventures, but only in movies or something else, but not in real life. But the, I hear a beep. It gets louder an louder. Suddenly I woke up and found out, that all I saw was just a dream...

Danke schonmal im Vorraus ;D