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(ps: sorry für die Rechtschreib-, Grammatikfehler; englisch ist nicht meine Muttersprache:)
Childhood
I was twelve years old
when I understood
That she won’t come back
Every day I sat before my window
and looked outside
Waiting for her to
Come back
But she didn’t
Slowly, my tears fell down
And touched the ground
I was fifteen years old
When I stood up of the ground
And started to concentrate
Although my head was still thinking of her,
My heart ached when I was looking at her photos
I knew that this was life
And that nothing and nobody was permanent
I was twenty years old
When I graduated from high school and entered college
She - still in my heart
I was thirty years old
When I met him
And forgot her
And loved him
I was forty years old
When my child graduated from high school and left me for college
I was eighty years old
When she came back with a huge smile
In her face
I couldn’t describe how happy I was to meet her again
I was ninety years old
When I closed my eyes for an eternity
She closed her eyes too, for a
Second and a last time
She, my dear childhood passed away